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Thank you for watching and providing your feedback! It seems to be a recurring criticism that the beginning is prolonged and doesn't have the necessary tension to sustain itself. This is a writing issue and I will work on making sure to cut the bloat out of my next project. I think actually fixing this will trickle down and solve the dialogue, acting, and perhaps even framing issues you listed (after all, everything starts to click when you feel engaged).

Appreciate your time, hope to blow you away with the next one!

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