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I agree. At this point, it’s useless to be too critical of your work. It’s only your first short film, and you really learn by doing.
I remember when I wanted to make films, I was overly critical of them, so much that I decided to not do anything, because I didn’t have the talent to make anything worthwhile. So, if you like your work, don’t let anyone change your mind.Back to Composition...