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Thanks for taking the time to watch the film! Obviously disappointed that you didn't enjoy it but extremely appreciative of your feedback. I can definitely see how the exposition can feel prolonged (~6:30 mins long). This was done intentionally as my hope was that the audience would be interested in the relationship between these two characters while at the same time receive key backstory tidbits (sort of like the beginning verbal tennis match scene between Rosalind Russell and Cary Grant in His Girl Friday). I guess it just didn't work on that level and came across as meandering. Thanks again for taking a look, I'll try better on the next one!

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